Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There have been several opinions on improving
safety
on the highway. While some think that reduction of speed limits on vehicles would improve
safety
on the
higways
a major road for any form of motor transport
highways
highway
, others opine that there are
betters
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better
ways to improve
safety
on the
road
. In my opinion, I consider that having qualify roads construction and functional vehicles on those
road
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roads
would be better options. On the one hand, some people think the best way to improve
road
safety
is to reduce
maximum speed
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the maximum speed limit
limit
.
This
is so because by reducing the speed
limit
, accident associated with over-speeding would reduce.
Also
, it would make the highway users more careful and conscious while driving. In
otherwords
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other words
, reduction of speed
limit
would put drivers
on
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in
check.
For instance
, a law was passed in Kenya, that drivers should only drive on 80km per hour,
this
has put a check on all drivers and has
reduce
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reduced
accidents associated with over-speeding.
In addition
, reduction of the maximum speed
limit
would reduce the gravity of
road
accidents.
On the other hand
, others are of the view that other measures like construction of quality roads and functional cars flying on those highways are better options to improve
road
safety
. I completely agree that when there are good quality roads, even if the users move on a very high speed they would in most cases still be safe.
For instance
, the Governor of Lagos State recently declared all roads in Lagos, a state of emergencies and along the line, he reconstructed majority of roads, making it safe for users to driver without fear of having an accident.
In addition
, if a law can be put in place to check the functionality and conditions of all vehicles that are moving on the highways,
this
would
also
improve
road
safety
. The combination of quality
road
construction and functional vehicles would definitely improve
road
safety
. To conclude, while people may have varying opinion, I believe constructions of good roads and functional vehicles on
such
roads would improve
road
saftey
the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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