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university students are increasingly study abroad as part of their studies. do the advantages of studying abroad out weigh the disadvantages.

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University students are raised to study foreign land has various pros and cons for their study concern. The main benefits for students studying overseas is the access to better quality of
education
. The main drawback is that living cost of foreign land is very expensive. In my opinion
besides
 these downsides students studying abroad enjoy better career prospects, achieve their objectives and goals. The positive aspect is that students will get high quality of
education
. The
education
 system is very fascinating. There are plethora research facilitates
however
, teachers are very qualified. One of my
friend
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friends
 went to foreign lands for completion of their studies. They said that
education system
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the education system
 of abroad is very superb and teaching facility is fantastic. The student
also
 learns lots of new things and improve their personality. On the downside living cost is very high. Some of the people struggling with expenses like room rent, food, transport, course expense ant their personal expenditure. So they are forced to do part time job while studying. As told earlier, my friend
also
 went for part time job while he was doing his master degree. So
this
 might be extra burden on the student and they spend less time on their subjects. To conclude that studying in overseas has become very common now a day. While studying students will face many barriers. It is in fact that these barriers are the main benefits to improve their personality and mental growth. Because of good quality
education
 they will get better jobs and learn many things.

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