These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree

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Violent
content
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in the form of video games, media channels, and
television
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dramas has seen a rapid increase over the
last
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few years.
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form of
content
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, when exposed to children, could have negative consequences on their personality and
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Some children might be more prone to the negative effects of
violence
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on
television
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than others might, but I do not agree that all children would demonstrate violent
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
due to exposure
toof
in the direction of
to
too
tough
brutal
content
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on
television
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. Studies have shown that children, particularly in their early years, absorb and retain a lot of information from the
television
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. The famous
television
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serial, ‘The
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Sesame
Street’ has proved to influence the
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and personalities of many children across the world.
In addition
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, children need reinforcement from their surroundings for their
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
to shape.
For example
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, a child living in Ghana would most probably demonstrate violent
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
if he/she watches violent
content
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on the
television
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and observes
violence
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in his village when he goes out and witnesses gunshots and blood from the wounded regardless of
content
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displayed on TV.
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, I believe blood and gore on
television
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, by itself, does not necessarily alter children’s
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Children in many countries play violent
videos
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video
games
such
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as ‘GrandtheftGrand theft Auto’ or ‘Call of Duty’ but that does not result in them expressing violent
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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is because they know it is just a game and consequences of
violence
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in a game and in a real world are very different.
On the contrary
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, children in many villages in Pakistan domestically abuse and beat their sisters even though they do not have any
television
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sets or exposure to violent
content
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.
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, violent
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
is not influenced by violent
content
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on the
television
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only; there are many other factors that affect
such
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. In conclusion, I would like to say that I do not agree with the statement that violent
content
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on the
television
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negatively affects children’s
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, as there isn’t enough scientific evidence to back up
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hypothesis.
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, it is better to limit exposure to
violence
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to children as other societal factors could reinforce violent
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • mimicking
  • aggressive
  • idolize
  • fear or anxiety
  • social interactions
  • mental health
  • proactive
  • supervision
  • content
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