These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree
Violent
content
in the form of video games, media channels, and television
dramas has seen a rapid increase over the last
few years. This
form of content
, when exposed to children, could have negative consequences on their personality and behavior
. Some children might be more prone to the negative effects of manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
violence
on television
than others might, but I do not agree that all children would demonstrate violent behavior
due to exposure manner of acting or controlling yourself
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on television
.
Studies have shown that children, particularly in their early years, absorb and retain a lot of information from the television
. The famous television
serial, ‘The Seseame
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behavior
and personalities of many children across the world. manner of acting or controlling yourself
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In addition
, children need reinforcement from their surroundings for their behavior
to shape. manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
For example
, a child living in Ghana would most probably demonstrate violent behavior
if he/she watches violent manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
content
on the television
and observes violence
in his village when he goes out and witnesses gunshots and blood from the wounded regardless of content
displayed on TV. Hence
, I believe blood and gore on television
, by itself, does not necessarily alter children’s behavior
.
Children in many countries play violent manner of acting or controlling yourself
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videos
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video
such
as ‘GrandtheftGrand theft Auto’ or ‘Call of Duty’ but that does not result in them expressing violent behavior
. manner of acting or controlling yourself
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This
is because they know it is just a game and consequences of violence
in a game and in a real world are very different. On the contrary
, children in many villages in Pakistan domestically abuse and beat their sisters even though they do not have any television
sets or exposure to violent content
. Therefore
, violent behavior
is not influenced by violent manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
content
on the television
only; there are many other factors that affect such
behavior
.
In conclusion, I would like to say that I do not agree with the statement that violent manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
content
on the television
negatively affects children’s behavior
, as there isn’t enough scientific evidence to back up manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
this
hypothesis. However
, it is better to limit exposure to violence
to children as other societal factors could reinforce violent behavior
in them.manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
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