Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

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As the world is moving ahead in terms of technological advancements, industries are flourishing in order to make human life easier. More and more investments are made in industries like real estate, pharmaceutics etc. But most importantly, we do only concern about our own lives, and there are more
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than
millions of
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that exist and their existence is on the line due to human actions. As the world population is increasing day by day,
need
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the need
for more and more land is
arising
advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status
rising
, and the
last
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resort we have is
forest
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. Every week, we hear from the news that forests in Australia are on the fire, sometimes forests in California are on the fire. Without knowing the reason, human beings are putting the
last
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nail in their own coffin. In
forest
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1000 of
species
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live and each and every
species
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are part of the food chain. The only home these animals have is the
forest
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and we are kicking them out and burning them alive, and most animal
species
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are on the verge of extinction due to
this
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. We can take the example of Koala Bear, which lives
on
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in
the branches of trees, and
forest
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degradation is turning them into rare
species
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. We don't know about Tasmanian Tiger
sit
be agreeable or acceptable to
suit
was an animal
species
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found in Australia and due to
forest
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logging, their generation came into
end
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the end
. These
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forest
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forests
are the natural source of oxygen, industrial pollutants that are released
in
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into
the atmosphere, like C02 etc., through the process of photosynthesis, the trees in the
forest
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takes
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carbon dioxide and releases oxygen, which is a primary for human survival. So in short,
forest
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is necessary for human survival as well animals, and we are challenging nature by cutting down trees and
as a result
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cutting down our own lives
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sink
  • global warming
  • indigenous tribes
  • livelihood
  • displacement
  • cultural erosion
  • soil erosion
  • water cycle
  • humidity levels
  • rainfall patterns
  • droughts
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • climate change
  • logging
  • rain forests
  • habitats
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