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Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, because of globalization, a lot of people travel to different
country
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. Some people think that visitors should adapt the local practices and customs when
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to a different culture, but the others think adapting local customs is not necessary. In my opinion, modifying the
country
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's manner is necessary because it helps us to integrate with the community and life becomes more convenient and easier.
Firstly
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, when tourists adjust a
country
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’s
practices
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practice
 will make the people there feel approachable and help them to integrate with the community more easily.
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, if visitors show respect to the
country
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 own manners, local people will accept and welcome them more enthusiastically.
Secondly
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, with a
business man
a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)
businessman
 going to another
country
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 to develop the company, when meeting the business partners, understanding and accepting their practices will help the meeting more effectively and get better results. If we don’t accept the
country
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’s manner, visitors will offend
others
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 people with friendly manners from their
country
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with out
in absence of
without
 knowing. Visitors own manners will make local people feel depressed and find
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 losing self-esteem, so it will be difficult for
tourist
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tourists
a tourist
the tourist
 to ask for direction or for help.
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, with some people knowing that the tourist is from a popular
country
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 or their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
country
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, the local people will find it interesting to learn other
country
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’s practices, so not only they welcome those visitors but
also
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 want to find out about other countries' culture.
On the other hand
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, the budding of different cultures contributes to establishing a multicultural environment, a prerequisite to attract many tourists from all over the world. To
conclusion
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conclude
, adapting a
country
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’s customs and practices
is not only easy for tourists but
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has only easy for tourists but also not helped
has only easy for tourists but not also helped
also
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 help them to integrate with the community and help them take a visit to another
country
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 of contentment.
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, I agree with the statement that has given.
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