The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that the rubbish collection

system

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in our area at Baitul Aman Housing Society is not working properly. The garbage bin

is always keep

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is always kept

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open , and always

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the

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worst smell is come out when

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anyone

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any one

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anyone

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pass by road, Me and my neighbours are facing many problems, Young children’s are facing some health issues. Nearest areas and local

peoples

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are

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affecting

with

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mosquitos. some neighbours are having

dangus

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dangers

dangerous

dengue

and

other dangerous disease

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another dangerous disease

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like malaria because of

inappropriate

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the inappropriate

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rubbish collection

system

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. In

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circumstance, A necessary step should be taken from the local authority, a new and

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apply

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affordable garbage

system

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need to place as earlier as possible by replacing the older

system

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. I look forward to hearing from you. Faithfully yours, Kristi Islam

kristiislam51Thu Nov 07 2019

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

134 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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