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use
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roads, bigger roads certainly provide them flexibility to drive safely.
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, making roads wider demands more lands and the scarcity of the land cannot be overlooked. More roads without space, makes the situation more
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government
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should spend
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tracks, as it serves more people.
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, it is the responsibility of the
government
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to understand
necessities
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the necessities
of citizens and
use
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sources and the funds effectively according to that.An increasing number of vehicles lead to
traffic
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congestion, which is faced by the most of the people. People have different solutions to alleviate
this
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issue
Use synonyms
. Some think that the best way is to build and improve railways, while others believe that, making roads wider can only the
solution
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to
Suggestion
To
overcome the problem. So, from
both
Use synonyms
of these, for which the
government
Use synonyms
should spend
money
Use synonyms
, is the debatable
issue
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.
This
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essay discusses
both
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views and arrives at its own view at the end. On the one
hand
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, it is the fact that trains are bigger than any other
road
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transportation vehicles.
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Therefore
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Therefor
, it facilitates a thousand of people at a time, which eventually, reduces the
use
Use synonyms
of private auto-mobiles on roads and makes the
traffic
Use synonyms
less stressful.
For example
Linking Words
, it is surveyed that, Mumbai local trains are facilitating more than a billion locals everyday, to commute across the
city
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
,
railway
Use synonyms
systems and
subway
Use synonyms
lines are mostly
at
Suggestion
on
the outskirts of the
city
Use synonyms
, which makes the inner
road
Use synonyms
congestion-free.
On the other
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hand
Use synonyms
, constructing wider roads is considered as the effective
solution
Use synonyms
by many. As, it is commonly seen that most locals
use
Use synonyms
roads, bigger roads certainly provide them flexibility to drive safely.
However
Linking Words
, making roads wider demands more lands and the scarcity of the land cannot be overlooked. More roads without space, makes the situation more
worsen
(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability
worse
than good. To conclude, according to me, the
government
Use synonyms
should spend
money
Use synonyms
in creating new
railway
Use synonyms
and
subway
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tracks, as it serves more people.
Although
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, it is the responsibility of the
government
Use synonyms
to understand
necessities
Suggestion
the necessities
of citizens and
use
Use synonyms
sources and the funds effectively according to that.An increasing number of vehicles lead to
traffic
Use synonyms
congestion, which is faced by the most of the people. People have different solutions to alleviate
thiss
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this
these
issue
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. Some think that the best way is to build and improve railways, while others believe that, making roads wider can only the
solution
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to
Suggestion
To
overcome the problem. So, from
both
Use synonyms
of these, for which the
government
Use synonyms
should spend
money
Use synonyms
, is the debatable
issue
Use synonyms
.
This
Linking Words
essay discusses
both
Use synonyms
views and arrives at its own view at the end. On the one
hand
Use synonyms
, it is the fact that trains are bigger than any other
road
Use synonyms
transportation vehicles.
Therefore
Linking Words
, it facilitates a thousand of people at a time, which eventually, reduces the
use
Use synonyms
of private auto-mobiles on roads and makes the
traffic
Use synonyms
less stressful.
For example
Linking Words
, it is surveyed that, Mumbai local trains are facilitating more than a billion locals everyday, to commute across the
city
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
,
railway
Use synonyms
systems and
subway
Use synonyms
lines are mostly
at
Suggestion
on
the outskirts of the
city
Use synonyms
, which makes the inner
road
Use synonyms
congestion-free.
On the other
Linking Words
hand
Use synonyms
, constructing wider roads is considered as the effective
solution
Use synonyms
by many. As, it is commonly seen that most locals
use
Use synonyms
roads, bigger roads certainly provide them flexibility to drive safely.
However
Linking Words
, making roads wider demands more lands and the scarcity of the land cannot be overlooked. More roads without space, makes the situation more
worsen
(comparative of 'bad') inferior to another in quality or condition or desirability
worse
than good. To conclude, according to me, the
government
Use synonyms
should spend
money
Use synonyms
in creating new
railway
Use synonyms
and
subway
Use synonyms
tracks, as it serves more people.
Although
Linking Words
, it is the responsibility of the
government
Use synonyms
to understand
necessities
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the necessities
of citizens and
use
Use synonyms
sources and the funds effectively according to that.

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