Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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The issue of whether travellers should obey local customs and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
when they visit to other countries or not is certainly a controversial topic. Despite some people utterly disagree with that and claim the host
country
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should be open-minded and accept
culture
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differences.
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, I personally believe that visitors should follow local policy and respect their
culture
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. The following statements will illustrate my point of views.
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of all, some people said that if one
country
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would like to embrace different concepts from other nationalities, people will become more flexible and diverse, which can be easily get along with different kinds of people.
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, in my humble opinion, it means
lose
something that is lost
loss
of their own
culture
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's features. Take a real example, New York is an international city and millions of different countries' people live there, yet we even do not know how to describe New Yorker's
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
or their customs. Their own customs are getting vanish due to the acceptance of
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culture
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cultural
difference. Based on
this
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reason, it is quite inappropriate to accept all countries'
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difference.
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, following and respecting local policy would be a proper way out. Not only preserve the original of local people's
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
,
Accept space
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but
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they share the different values to the visitors. Meanwhile, visitors should respect that some people in the world who are not having similar concepts like them and it would be perfect if they can balance their
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cultural
differences.
For instance
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, like Australia, they embrace people from around the world to immigrate to their
country
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while they still keep their original
culture
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concept and their
culture
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and local customs are not influenced by outsiders at all. In summary, I still believe that respecting local customs
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are
necessary. No matter others dispute and think that host
country
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should be open-minded, I strongly consider protecting local
culture
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is overriding.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural understanding
  • cultural harmony
  • local customs and behaviours
  • host country's traditions
  • unintentional offense
  • enhance the travel experience
  • cultural fabric
  • inclusive society
  • diverse society
  • global understanding
  • mutual respect
  • respect for local customs
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