Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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: Every year a number of wild animals are being extinct and the increasing number of endangered species worldwide is an alarming issue for us. Some people are
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the opinion that we should try to save all the wild animals while others believe that we should emphasise on saving some selective wild animals.
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of all, wild animals are part of our eco-system and they have as much share as we have on
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Earth. Due to exploit and overuse of natural resources by humans, many
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wild animals are getting wiped out. Since we, human, are the main reasons their existence
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in danger, it is our obligation to protect them. While planning and executing our steps to save wild animals, we should never select
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one or some or every or all without specification
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wild animals while letting others die. In fact, it is quite unclear what would be the determining factors
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our biassed selection? Many people, in
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case, would argue that we should focus on saving wild animals which are fewer in numbers and have greater chances of extinction like Royal Bengal Tigers and Pandas.
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, I disagree. If we take proper steps to save wild animals, that would include any wild animal found around us.
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, if we can ensure a natural inhabitation of all wild animals and prohibit any actions that might threaten them, would actually save all the wild animals. When saving some selective wild animals, many argue that geological garden could a safe place for them. In fact, the reality is quite contrary. We should not put wild animals in cages and
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them freely live in their natural living place. International organisations like UN, UNESCO, WWF, Wildlife Alliance etc.
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Sometimes
work on saving endangered
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animals, but
that does not restrict their activities for saving those wild animals only. They have broader plans and several initiatives for saving all the wildlife animals.
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,
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won activities like logging trees, increasing use of cars, expanding cities, luxury, rampant hunting of animals etc.
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the main threats to every wild animal in the world and the time has come for us to step forward and stop
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activities. Saving every wild animal is a dire need not only to maintain the natural balance but
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for our own well-being. In conclusion, we should save every wild animal
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still present in the world. Selecting some wild animals for saving is an idea we should discard as it would bring more devastating effects than positive ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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