Some people think money is the best gift to give to teenagers others disagree to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often thought by some people that the best present to offer youngsters is cash, in my

opinion I

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opinion, I

think there are other souvenirs

such

as bags, shoes and other items that can be given as rewards. On the one hand, while some people argued that the most appropriate gift for adolescents is

money

and I agree

this

is because sometimes, the individuals involved may come from

such

a poverty stricken background that they truly need the currency for survival.

As a result

, basic needs are met and

such

teens are happy. To illustrate

this

, there was a young child in my street who needed

money

to pay her school fees, the church helped her with some cash every semester and now she is a graduate.

On the other hand

, even though it is argued by some people that

money

is the most excellent gift that can be offered to teenagers, I believe that other

items

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items, such

such

as bags, shoes or beautiful dresses could be the best depending on the situation. More often than not, there is no amount of

money

that can be given to children from

very rich background

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a very rich background

that they will

appreciate but

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appreciate, but

sometimes a beautiful present

such

as nice bags, shoes or dresses may come in handy.

In addition

, given

money

to teenagers may make them do what they are not supposed to do

for instance

, when given cash, a young boy can get into drugs and alcohols. In conclusion, even though some are of the opinion that hard currency is the most suitable reward to be presented to young adults, I think other souvenirs

such

as nice bags and wrist watch may be preferred by some teens.