You are planning a week-long vacation and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away.Write a letter to your neighbour and tell them that you are going away. In your letter,you should: Why you will be away Ask them to take care of your house Explain what tasks you would like your neighbour to do
Dear Sam ,
I hope
this
letter finds you in a radiant of health and great spirits. I am writing this
letter to let you know that I am going to India for the holidays and my flight will be tomorrow at 10 pm.
As you know , I came to Canada four years ago so , I feel
Wrong verb form
felt
home
sickness Correct your spelling
homesick
then
I decided to meet my parents who lives
in India. Change the verb form
live
Moreover
, I am super excited and ecstatic to see them and I feel energetic as well as
enthusiastic . I will be away from my house for a week, if you can take care of my place in my absence would be greatly appreciated.
The primary thing to do is to put all the garbage at the front door which is already in the garage . Secondly
, I ordered some stuff from Amazon once it is delivered , take it to your place for the
safety reasons.
I hope you have time to perform these chores and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
RamCorrect article usage
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content
Task Response: Ensure you fully address all parts of the task. Clearly specify the duration of your trip and the reason for absence in the beginning. Also, make sure to explain how your neighbor can contact you in case of emergencies or if further clarification is needed on the tasks.
structure
Coherence and Cohesion: Your letter flows well. To improve, try to connect your ideas more smoothly within paragraphs using linking words or phrases. Additionally, organizing your tasks in a bulleted or numbered list could enhance readability and the overall structure.
tone
Greeting and Closing: Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal and suit the context well. For further refinement, consider a slightly more personal touch depending on your relationship with the neighbor, without compromising the formal tone necessary for such a request.
grammar
Variety in Sentence Structure: While your letter has a good range of sentence structures, incorporating more complex structures can demonstrate a higher level of English proficiency. Try combining or rephrasing sentences to make your letter more compelling.