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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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There are many languages in the world.
However
, minority languages are going to disappear due to the decreased use among the people. While there are some opinions suggesting that spending on
language
 preservation is wasteful, I believe that preventing
language
 destruction should be seriously invested in by the government. On the
one
 hand, tribal communities’ languages are not commonly used and
that is
 not helpful when it comes to economic benefits. Some popularly spoken languages
such
 as Chinese, Spanish, English and Arabic are utilized worldwide while rarely spoken languages are not widely used.
Therefore
, people think that the government should prioritize their budget on other important sectors
such
 as education, infrastructure, technology and national defence.
For example
, in Europe, it is encouraged that
one
 country only speaks
one
language
 which not only helps significantly reduce misunderstandings in communication, but
also
 drive the cross-border trading become smoother by using a unified
language
.
On the other hand
, destruction in languages will lead to the loss of cultural
diverses
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
difference
. Because each
language
 presents a unique culture and speciality of that community, the distinction will unintentionally destroy its beauty.
For example
, the data show that three languages astonish every day and that future generations will no longer enjoy the diversification in the world cultural heritage because of the boring unification of languages. In short,
language
 is
one
 of the valuable assets of world cultures.
Although
language
 preservation’s cost concern of lots of people with its less noticeable economic benefits, the values in
cultural
Suggestion
culturally
diverses
many and different
diverse
drivers
 are far more important to think about.

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