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You have an extended family and every year you all get together to go on a family trip for a week. Your uncle is incharge of plans this year and you would like to suggest a place you have visited today.

#year #get #trip #week #uncle #incharge #plans #place
Dear uncle I hope you and aunt are in radiant health and doing well. I am writing
this
 letter as a reminder to you that you are the
incharge
 of
this
year
Suggestion
year's
 family trip arrangements. I hope
this
 year we will have remarkable holidays. I would like to suggest you that we could plan our trip to some hill station in India. There are many areas which have picturesque views and amazing activities
to enjoy enjoy
Suggestion
to enjoy
. I want you to search about Kullu
Manali Himachal
Accept comma addition
Manali, Himachal
 Pradesh, it is
also
 known as
hub
Suggestion
the hub
a hub
 of the India.
This
 is carbon free so it would be very beneficial relax our body and mind, far away from pollution. There are many activities which
,
Accept space
,
we can do to make a call
to
Suggestion
for
 more enthralled
such
 as hiking,
paragliding
Suggestion
Paragliding
, river rafting under the proper guidance. I believe,
it it
the thing named or in question
it
 will be a wonderful destination. As you know I am really fond of handicraft and artefacts. I would shop lot of antique pieces as there are many craft shops. I hope you would like my suggestions. I am really excited to meet you all.
with
the last of the four Gospels in the New Testament
John
 regards john smith

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