A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans,while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs,including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's era, some group of members in society
are using
animals for their personal benefits like killing for offering to god and Suggestion
is using
also
for medical inventions. But the other part of the society members condemns this
and suggest to treat them equal to human beings. I strongly admit and stand with the opinion of treating every creature on earth as a human being. This
essay would discuss both the views in detail.
Majority
of the people using animals for food preparation, as 80% of the people across the world are non vegetarians. All the Suggestion
The majority
restraunts
and food courts are the top users of animals. a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
Moreover
, animals are used for medical inventions & practices. For example
, some parts of the dog are used for producing the insulin medicine which is used for treating the diabates
in human beings. a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
Also
, newly invented medicines are applied on
animals to test whether they sustain or not for high dosages.
Suggestion
to
However
, there are other part of the society members, who seriously deny this
. They believe that government should encourage researchers to identify the alternative methodologies to not to use the animal creatures. For example
, enterprenuers
to invent technologies that creates robot based DNA structures as like animals so that the animal extinction can be reduced. someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
Also
, in parallel awareness campaigns to be introduced to highlight the benefits of vegetarian food.
In conclusion, it is important that the medical research is undoubtedly required to keep the world healthy. However
, people should be mindfull
of the fact that animals bearing in mind; attentive to
mindful
also
have the equal rights as human beings.Submitted by eshwar10882 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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