Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums
a believer in or follower of Islam
Muslims
these days plays an essential role in education, learning and entertainment.
However
, several museums offer their services for
free whereas
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free, whereas
others asked their clients to pay fees for entrance. I believe that charging for admission is paramount.
This
essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of
this
issue. On one hand, visiting of museums without paying any money has many shortcomings. From
museum's perspective
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a museum's perspective
the museum's perspective
, being free for all public all over the year may lead to host large number of individuals that will make museums overcrowded.
As a result
, school's pupils and children would not be learned properly due to congestion. From
individual's perspective
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an individual's perspective
the individual's perspective
, only high-income persons have the ability to visit
such
knowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
places.
In other words
, poor people could
deprive
reason by deduction; establish by deduction
derive
from museums' services and opportunities to explore more as they cannot spend their time there. In spite of the aforementioned disadvantages, there are a myriad of advantages.
Firstly
, museums not only can update their appliances and operating software, but they
also
can upgrade their belongings through purchasing of many valuable masterpieces.
Secondly
, museums can exploit their
entrance's
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entrance
fees in achieving many vital things
such
as pay for internet services, water, electricity and even telephone bills.
Lastly
, those payments can be invested by
administration
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the administration
to enhance their human resources' abilities through flying overseas to attend training courses and through exchange of experiences. To conclude, I convince that charging for entrance of
museums
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the museums
is far more important than being free for all in order to be operated, developed and updated effectively. It is recommended that if the
museums
a believer in or follower of Islam
Muslims
did not take
in
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into
their consideration that charging fees should be inexpensive, they would face many serious problems
such
as losing of their customers.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Preservation
  • Exclusionary
  • Revenue
  • Artifact
  • Maintenance
  • Engagement
  • Admission fee
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Sustainable funding
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