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Although internet has some benefits yet its overuse has some negative impacts on human. Do you agree or disagree

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Internet
Suggestion
The internet
 has revolutionized the world with its facilitation in human's life in which its overusing has a number of negative effects along with its
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
 ones.
Therefore
, I agree with the former point of view, which will
further
 be explained with relevant reasons and examples. It has facilitated individuals to complete their household jobs sitting at home;
therefore
, it affects masses' health with some fatal diseases with rays that are emitted while connecting because these rays directly or indirectly impacts internal organs as well as External parts of our body. For illustration, heart attack and blood-clotting are common among new born to old-age people.
Moreover
, with having provision of leading a comfortable and easy
life-style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, people have become addicted to wasting their precious time which is generally on social media as well as online video streaming,
such
 as everyone has smart phones to easily access
this
 all stuff with
unlimted
having no limits in range or scope
unlimited
 data packs which is time consuming. In brief, with the easiness of online working, it has some drawbacks as well. So, I consider that
this
 invention be utilized to only limits by considering its negativities too.

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