nowaday , people normally stretch their works hours and get stressed than before . what are the reasons for this ? what can employers do to make people's life easier ?

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Several

people

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have indeed devoted

are indeed devoting

indeed devote

their time to their working hours.

However

, it is hazardous for their life spine, because of stress and strain in

this

essay

refers to the speaker or writer

will enlist reason for

such

things to happen, along with, suggesting measures curb

this

problem.

there

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There

is an enormous reason factor because of which nowadays

trends

have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined

tends

work

extra hours and why people becoming stressful.

firstly

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Firstly

, it is due to heavy pressure given by employers to finish a project on time.

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one person doesn't

work

on time, it may affect the entire team and productivity of the firm.

another

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Another

reason is the competitiveness in the market

Accept space

regarding plenty of employees available due to the high population and growing personal expenditure of individuals, it means employers hiring the potential candidate.

the

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The

employees can be eliminated anytime if they cannot

work

efficiently, working extra hours chosen by many people.

fortunately

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Fortunately

, aftermath means are available through which

this

issue will be curtailed.

many

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Many

people believe that exercise, yoga, relax dancing could reduce the stress of regular

work

that's

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That's

why employers are providing the gym and yoga

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

for their staff members can relax during office hours.

another

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Another

solution to

this

issue is that employees should set themselves a timetable, order to balance whether home or office works, focus their

works

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work

efficiently, avoid

anythings

an indefinite thing

anything

disturb their

work

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conclusion, working extra hours and getting stressed at

work

is a big problem for many companies, and a solution should be implemented urgently to tackle

this

problem.

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nowaday , people normally stretch their works hours and get stressed than before . what are the reasons for this ? what can employers do to make people's life easier ?

Fully explain your ideas

The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Modern culture around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons. Is it a positive development or a negative development, in your opinion.

Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms in other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.