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Some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is indisputable that the public
library
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 is one of the most important categories when talking about social benefits, and the issue of whether public libraries are important or not is definitely a controversial one. Despite the fact that many people disagree with the importance of
public
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the public library
library
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, I believe it is necessary to construct public libraries within communities.
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 public libraries are indispensable to the interest of the masses, I do believe there are many things nowadays that degrades the importance of public libraries.
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, as the internet plays an increasingly important role in human’s life, accessing books is not as hard as that from the old days. You would only need a click before you could read almost every book
that is
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 available in a public
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 at home.
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, the cost of reading ebooks is competitive compared to maintaining a
memebership
the body of members of an organization or group
membership
 of a
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, given that the books that are once
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being
 downloaded can be owned forever.
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, given the fact that there are so many disadvantages of going to public libraries, I still regard public libraries as important and irreplaceable.
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, public libraries
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provides
 equal opportunities
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for
every one
all people
everyone
 on accessing knowledge. Given that most public libraries are funded by the government with the intention of increasing the education level of its citizens, they are usually free to the poor and the homeless. In
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 case, those that neither own a computer nor could pay for books can go to public libraries

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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