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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Most of the people believe that,
music
 is a linking sources of different cultures as well as ages together. Sometimes
this
 has been argued among the different societies. Not only musics, other aesthetic subjects and mathematics have been considered as sources of connecting of different origins. During
this
 discussion, I will give my personal opinion in
this
 regards.
Although
 I agree with the given statement, there are points to be disagreed with it. The language of a country is specific to relevant country while
music
 is a global language.
Therefore
, I believe that
music
 can be understood by anyone who can hear well enough.
Moreover
, the level of understanding may differ from person to person, but it provides a medium to build a bridge between different nations over the planet.
On the other hand
, I have seen different age groups feeling well enough in the same theme.
Hence
,
music
 established strong hub among cultures and ages. Some people strongly trust that,
music
 cannot make people together. I
also
 agree with
this
 statement
upto
Suggestion
up to
 some level, because some musics does not understandable for all citizens in the world. As an example, when an Indian person listens to a Japan
music
, sometimes it becomes horrible for the Indian.
In
Suggestion
On
such
 occasions,
music
 will not make proper contact between
such
 nations.
Further
, 70th century
music
 will not
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 a youngs in nowadays.
Hence
,
confilict
an open clash between two opposing groups (or individuals)
conflict
conflicts
 of interest may be
occured
Suggestion
occurred
occurring
. In conclusion,
music
 can be used to build up strong hub between different cultures as well as ages in some occasions while sometimes it fails.
Hence
, before implement
music
 as a connecting medium of cultures and ages, need to do a pre evaluation.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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