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Nowadays young adults seem to prefer to spend their leisure shopping. What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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It is true that young people like to spend their spare
time
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 in shopping Centre. I understand that spending idle
time
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 in shopping mall
give
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gives
 them various innovative knowledge
from
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of
 modern technology to traditional and overseas clothes and their qualities. Actually,
modern world
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the modern world
 has been developing by introducing
newness
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new
 technology and fashions for
postmodern
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the postmodern time
postmodern times
time
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.
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, Children are very curious about knowing in contemporary technology and fashionable clothes.
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 with, there are several reasons, why young pupils prefer their leisure
time
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 to spend on shopping Centre. The
first
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 and most reason is that by going shopping
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, they can see physically technological gadgets and operation as well as
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brand
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a brand
, which enhance their knowledge on modern technological devices and acts that help their future studies. It goes without saying that to get practical skill is a good thing,
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, many business executive bodies give
opportunity
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opportunities
an opportunity
the opportunity
 for children to get recreational indoor activities in their shopping
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, where children can enjoy these skills with cheaper of cost. In fact, it attracts children a lot
for
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of
 enjoying facilities and they want to go there very frequently. Apart from
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, modern young generation
are
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is
 very conscious about fashion,
however
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, they want to keep
face
the rate of moving (especially walking or running)
pace
 with foreign culture and new design of clothes and prestigious
brand
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.
In addition
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, many students spend their leisure
time
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 by involving part
time
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 work in shopping
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center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, which help them to maintain their life any difficulty
as financial problem
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as a financial problem
.
On the other hand
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, spending
time
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 in
shopping
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a shopping centre
shopping centre
shopping centres
center
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 has had some positive impacts
for
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of
 individual younger adult.
Initially
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, they can come to know
wide range
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a wide range
 of
brand
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 and their quality that make them to choose
right one
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the right one
.
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, maintaining clothes in tender age, they become quite fashionable and enhance their knowledge about foreign
brand
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,
Accept space
,
culture, norms and their diversity. After involving in fashion, many young adults,
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, can participate in international fashion events and can get highest award that make them
fame
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famous
 in home and abroad. In conclusion
,
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, although young
although
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, young adults have important to know contemporary things. It comes out their inner beauty that helps them to make new objects. To make a modern country is it very important to know diversity throughout the world.

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