the pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year,2016.
The pie charts compare the
proportion
of incomes and expenditures
for an American charity in 2016.
It is noticeable that such
dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for revenue
and costs in terms of total
money. Donated food received by far the highest Add an article
the total
proportion
of the revenue
sources. On the other hand
, program services made up the largest amount of expenditures
.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that donated food is on
the top of charity’s income sources with 86.6%. Change preposition
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earning sectors followed by community contributions and program revenue
with only 10.4% and 2.2% respectively. By contrast
, the same proportion
of revenue
(0.2%) is earned by government grants and investment income.
In the expenditures
chart, program services account for the vast majority of consumption with 95.8%. The costs of fundraising welcomed
by 2.6% as the Add a missing verb
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second
sector of expenditures
. Finally
, the lowest proportion
of utilaztion
was management and general, with only 1.6%.Correct your spelling
utilization
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