In some countries an increasing a number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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The statement that your body is what you eat, is well accepted by intellectuals as health issues are at their peak because of unhealthy diet taken by people in many nations.
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has given a rise to an idea of levying a hefty impost on unhealthy eatables. I hold a different opinion regarding
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notion because junk
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has its own advantages, those cannot be neglected, especially in terms of time-saving, variations and employment generation. Upcoming paragraphs will support my view with related examples.
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and foremost reason is a fast lifestyle that has become a need of the hour. One has to cut short the time on these activities in order to earn more and more and if the prices of foodstuff have been increased because of tax,
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it will increase the burden on pocket of common people.
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, some individuals live far away from
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they completely depend upon available eatables.
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, students do not find time cook for
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themselves, they
need ready-made as they are required to concentrate on their studies and career. Talking about their health, it is suggested that a check should be made by the authorities on the quality of the
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as well as the ingredients used by vendors to cook it.
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, it is very difficult to control one's cravings, as it adds a variation to the daily traditional
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. There are wide options available in the market which are temptations and sumptuous, so a glutton cannot refuse to take them.
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some children
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enjoyed by them whole heartedly. So variety and taste force them to eat vegetables too.
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but not the least is the generation of employment
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profession. Many chefs and cooks who possess a talent to modify simple and boring
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into easily available, tasty dish, depend upon
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profession. In case of higher duty the prices will hike and that
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their business and career. Again the government and
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Corporation of the province can interfere here by awarding and grading
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items which are healthier. It should
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educate and motivate consumers to eat non-fried and fibrous material,
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in turn may force sellers to sell the healthy version.
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, fried burger can be replaced by the baked one, healthy vegetables can be added
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flour can be used to bake bread. In conclusion, levying a heavy duty on fast
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is not the end solution of unhealthy lifestyle. New healthy versions can be adopted to make it healthy and acceptable world-wide.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overconsumption
  • diet-related illnesses
  • healthcare system
  • disincentive
  • public health
  • safeguard
  • economic burden
  • lower-income populations
  • public education campaigns
  • food labeling
  • health implications
  • obesity
  • heart disease
  • diabetes
  • nutrition education
  • punitive measures
  • inequity
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • productivity
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