Mrs Barrett,An english speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours in a day next summer.Write a letter to mirs Barrett suggest how could you help her in her work. say why you like to do this job. when you will and not be will avaible.

Dear Mrs.Barette, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I recently came across your advertisement seeking assistance in your home for a few hours a day next summer, and I am eager to express my interest in the position. Having lived in the same town, I believe I can provide valuable support with various tasks around your home, I have experience with house chores.
Such
as cleaning, decorating living rooms and watering plants every day. I am proficient in English and possess strong communication skills which would facilitate smooth coordination. I am a parent with
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family support, and my circumstances make it difficult for me to provide facilities for loved ones.
This
opportunity to work with you would allow me to contribute to your household but would
also
greatly assist in addressing the pressing needs of my own family.
Although
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I will be available during the summer months, I won’t be available in the morning hours.
Due to
the responsibility of taking my kids to school.
However
, I am fully available during the afternoons and evenings. I am committed to ensuring that my responsibilities do not interfere with my dedication to providing assistance in your home. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Shahid umer
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertisement
  • assist
  • specific tasks
  • cleaning
  • cooking
  • gardening
  • experience
  • employment
  • availability
  • enthusiasm
  • opportunity
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