some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning countrie's culture and experience while others believe it is better to travelling with someone you know.Discuss both views and share your opinion.

While India remained the popular destination throughout the period, Pakistan saw a decline in their popularity. India was marginally more popular visited place,
although
Thailand had a far fewer visitors during the same period;
however
, Japan was nowhere near as favourite as other countries. Both China and the USA had a similar growth in the
first
25 years,
thereafter
, the former,
then
declined as the latter continued to flourish. Dubai witnessed a decline, before
rising
come into existence; take on form or shape
arising
after July. In the month of March both items had a similar amount of production.Both items witnessed a decline before rising after May. In the month of September both countries had a similar pattern of increase.Overall, what stands out is that India contribute the majority of pollutants, whereas only a small minority is made up of the USA The UK and Germany were not nearly as emit as other countries. The high school students contribute the majority of the younger generation, while only a smaller minority is made up of Qatar’s pollution.
However
, China nowhere near as polluting as Ghana. Overall,
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
is
Suggestion
am
have been
claer
readily apparent to the mind
clear
cooler
solar
that bees must go through a cyclical progression of six stages to make honey, whereas commercial production of honey consist of five steps. Overall, what stands out that salmon must undergo cyclical progression six stages of life cycle from
lying
the production of eggs (especially in birds)
laying
egg
Suggestion
eggs
by adult to become mature adult.
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