Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary era, Remuneration plays a vital role in

individual's

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an individual's

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prospects,

while

selecting an organization to

work

with.

However

, few people argue

,

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that, working

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working

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the working

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environment is considered to be the most important aspect

to opt

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of opting

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for a

job

. I completely agree with the latter notion, and

this

essay will elucidate both views and provide an opinion. In the first place,

peaceful

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a peaceful

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environment at

work place

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the workplace

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is

one

of the key factors to be considered

while

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when

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choosing a

job

. With the technological advancements where corporate organizations

pushing

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push

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their boundaries to perform beyond expectations, it is important to provide a healthy environment to the employees for high productivity. An organization with a

work life

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work-life

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balance and the boss being a leader who treats their subordinates

along with

him as a team is considered to be chosen.

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, as per the market trends, companies which are offering

a flexible

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flexible work hours

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work

hours and

work from home

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work-from-home

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concepts are performing leaps and bounds. On the other side, salary is

also

one

of the key

aspect

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aspects

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while

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when

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opting for an offer. To lead a prosperous social life with the whooping expenses like a child's education, house

rents

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rent

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, day to

day

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day-to-day

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living expenses, it is important that,

one

needs to

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apply

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choose a

job

that

is offering

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offers

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the best compensation in the market.

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, employees are applying for multiple jobs in parallel and trying to close

the

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a

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deal

that

is paying

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pays

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high without any variable pay structures included.

Moreover

, sometimes they

are arguing

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argue

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to get higher pay by showing other

company

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companies

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job

offer letters. To summarise, high compensation is important and

one

of the key factors

to choose

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in choosing

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a

job

, but not at the cost of

loosing

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losing

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peace. I

thus

, strongly recommend

to choose

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choosing

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a

job

which gives a

self satisfaction

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self-satisfaction

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with stress being the low side with

a

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apply

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fair compensation.