Your new neighbours have recently invited you to a party they are holding next Saturday. However, you have other plans on Saturday evening and cannot attend the party. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: · thank them for the invitation · mention what plans you already have · suggest when you can meet them Write at least 150 words.

#neighbours #party #saturday #plans #invitation

Dear

Mr.

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Brown, I am writing to thank you for inviting me

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the

party

which you are holding

Saturday. It is very kind of you, and I was very excited

for

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the

party

however

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unfortunately

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I won’t be able to come as I have a conference in my office. Let me explain

you

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more in detail. I have recently switched my job in a very reputed investment banking company. And on

Saturday Foreign delegates are coming to my organization for finalizing a deal. I am

the

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part of that deal. As per my boss instruction, I have to be

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the conference. If we get that project our company turnover would be double. I wanted to be at your home and enjoy the

party

and get to know some of your relatives and friends. Could you let me know any other day after Saturday? Hopefully, we will do that on Sunday and have some quality time together. Please let me know. Wishing you a grand

party

and have fun with your guests. Yours Sincerely Vandana

Submitted by vandanaguglani89 on Wed Nov 13 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

177 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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