The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. In your letter: · introduce yourself · explain the condition of the road · and suggest what they should do

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Dear Sir/ Ma’am, I am Vandana Guglani and I have been living at 15, U block

road

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pink

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a pink

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town house

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townhouse

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in DLF phase -3. I am living here

from

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past

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5 years. I am writing to let you know that the

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condition in front of my house is very bad. And, U block

road

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is the main

road

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of DLF phase -3 which connects V, W and T blocks. Let me explain

you

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in detail. Recently, due to heavy

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a large hole has been observed in front of my house. During rains the hole filled with water, so it might be dangerous for the people passing by the

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and for the drivers who are not paying enough attention. Because of

this

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hold

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other roads are

also

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getting damaged. I have tried

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office many times

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I have not got any

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from them.

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, I request you to look after the issue personally and take immediate action to repair the

road

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. Looking forward

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prompt action from your end. Yours Sincerely Vandana

vandanaguglani89Wed Nov 13 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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