The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road. In your letter: · introduce yourself · explain the condition of the road · and suggest what they should do

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Dear Sir/ Ma’am, I am Vandana Guglani and I have been living at 15, U block

road

pink

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town house

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in DLF phase -3. I am living here

from

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past

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5 years. I am writing to let you know that the

road

condition in front of my house is very bad. And, U block

road

is the main

road

of DLF phase -3 which connects V, W and T blocks. Let me explain

you

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in detail. Recently, due to heavy

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a large hole has been observed in front of my house. During rains the hole filled with water, so it might be dangerous for the people passing by the

road

and for the drivers who are not paying enough attention. Because of

this

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other roads are

also

getting damaged. I have tried

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office many times

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from them.

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, I request you to look after the issue personally and take immediate action to repair the

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. Looking forward

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prompt action from your end. Yours Sincerely Vandana

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