The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The three pie charts illustrate the average proportion of three various nutrients, namely
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
, in four different meals in the USA. If these types of nutrients be
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Overall
, it can be seen that the
large amount of Change the article
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sodium
and saturated fat consumed
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is consumed
in
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at
dinner
. Also
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,Also
consumption
of added sugar
is related to snacks
.
The first chart (Sodium
) shows the
equal percentages of Correct article usage
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sodium
(14%) consumed in snacks
and breakfast, while
dinner
stood the first rank with 48%. Approximately a third
of sodium
ate in lunch. Looking at the second
Chart (Saturated fat), it is clear that
37% and 26% of this
nutrient consumed
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is consumed
in
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at
dinner
and lunch respectively. Snacks
and breakfast are responsible for consumption
of 21% and 16% of saturated fat in turn. The Add an article
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last
chart illustrates the consumption
of added sugar
in which snacks
(42%) and dinner
(just under a third
) ranked the
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the
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second
in turn in terms of consumption
of extra sugar
.19% of added sugar
consumed
in lunch, followed by breakfast with 16%.Add a missing verb
was consumed
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