Many people believe that social networking sites like Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.to what extent do you agree?

Social networking sites,
for instance
Facebook
, are thought by some people to have detrimental effects on individuals as well as the
society
and some local communities.
However
, while I believe that
such
sites are beneficial to the individuals, I agree that they have a damaging effect on local communities. With regards to individuals the impact that social media has had on individuals has got clear advantages.
firstly
Suggestion
Firstly
, people from different places are brought together through
such
sites as
Facebook
whereas before the development of technology and
society
networking sites people rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or circle.
Facebook
also
had social groups which
offers
Suggestion
offer
a chance to meet and participate in discussions with people who share common interests.
On the other hand
the effect
Facebook
and other social networking sites have had on
society
and communities have only been seen as negative. Rather than individual people taking part in local communities
,
Accept space
,
they are
instead
choosing to show more interest in others lives online.
consequentualy
Suggestion
Consequently
Consequentially
Consequential
Consequentualy
, the crowd inside local communities are no longer forming or showing any close or supportive relationships.
Furthermore
,
society
as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and fragmented as people are showing more interest in people they have never met face to face and who they are not going to meet in the future. To conclude,
although
social networking sites have brought people closer together they have not had the same effect on individuals or local communities. Local communities should do more to try and involve more local people in local activities in order to promote the future of community life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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