Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Advertisements are ubiquitous nowadays, through TV, Internet, billboard, posters and many more. Even though It has a huge number of positive impacts on people and society, we cannot ignore the detrimental effects.

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with, Advertisements not only work as promotion of products but they are

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major way of educating people about various government awareness programs. For an example, the polio prevention government program created a gigantic impact on society for awareness.

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, It can give a variety of options to choose from, while buying a product.

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, we cannot deny that they are one of the important sources of entertainment.

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, few advertisements are either funny or

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that it’s hard to resist from watching.

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, Due to excessive advertisements people might feel annoyed or stressed.

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, few commercials have an inappropriate way of displaying sometimes and that can make a person uncomfortable or miserable.

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, people are lured to buy expensive things or unnecessary stuff. Even that can lead to making unrealistic goals or unnecessary mental stress.

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and they might develop rude behaviour when parents cannot afford luxury products and

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can lead to critical mental health issues. To put

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in a nutshell, I pen down, saying that there are numerous disadvantages of advertising but the importance of advertising is enormous.

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, few negative effects can be minimized by social awareness and applying strict regulation on advertisements by government.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Language teachers should concentrate on giving positive feedback when students do good work, and teachers should never criticize bad work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Older generation often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. Comics, books, radio, television, film, theatre

These days many kids spend a lot of their time playing computer games instead of doing sports. What is the cause of this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?