Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertisements are ubiquitous nowadays, through TV, Internet, billboard, posters and many more. Even though It has a huge number of positive impacts on people and society, we cannot ignore the detrimental effects.
To begin
with, Advertisements not only work as promotion of products but they are
also
major way of educating people about various government awareness programs. For an example, the polio prevention government program created a gigantic impact on society for awareness.
Moreover
, It can give a variety of options to choose from, while buying a product.
Also
, we cannot deny that they are one of the important sources of entertainment.
Furthermore
, few advertisements are either funny or
creative
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creating
created
such
that it’s hard to resist from watching.
On the other hand
, Due to excessive advertisements people might feel annoyed or stressed.
Also
, few commercials have an inappropriate way of displaying sometimes and that can make a person uncomfortable or miserable.
Besides
this
, people are lured to buy expensive things or unnecessary stuff. Even that can lead to making unrealistic goals or unnecessary mental stress.
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For
instance, kids are the
first
one affected by
such
and they might develop rude behaviour when parents cannot afford luxury products and
this
can lead to critical mental health issues. To put
this
in a nutshell, I pen down, saying that there are numerous disadvantages of advertising but the importance of advertising is enormous.
However
, few negative effects can be minimized by social awareness and applying strict regulation on advertisements by government.
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