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Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Duscuss both views and give your opinion.

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The relevance of nurseries is growing at a high rate,
therefore
 many people tend to believe that attending to preschool
preparational
the activity of putting or setting in order in advance of some act or purpose
preparation
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
,
such
 as
kindergardens
a preschool for children age 4 to 6 to prepare them for primary school
kindergartens
kindergarten
, is essential for children' growth.
However other
Accept comma addition
However, another
However another
 part is convinced that nurseries are not that important, as they seem to be.
This
 following essay will consider both statements, and discuss perspectives on the
children
Suggestion
children's
' overall progression. It is clear that the nurseries have provided youngster's parents an opportunity to leave their child for a time in special centres, without any worries. Due to busy schedules, adults are not able to take care of their children, properly.
Cosequently
Suggestion
Consequently
, they
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
enrolled
 their child to
local kindergarden
Suggestion
the local kindergarten
local kindergarten
, where the youngster receives
apprpriate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
 care and acquires some basic cognitive and vital life skills. Nurseries tend to
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
 in children the desire to learn and study,
also
such
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
 ameliorate some essential social habits,
such
 as safety behaviour in a crowded
places
Suggestion
place
 or setting new relationships with people.
However
, others are not
considering
Suggestion
considered
 nurseries' impact on children' overall performance, as effective and productive way to study. They strongly believe that
kindergardens
a preschool for children age 4 to 6 to prepare them for primary school
kindergarten
 can not find a proper approach to their students, due to varieties in the behaviour and uniqueness of every child. Notwithstanding the fact that
such
 phenomenon usually takes place in public nurseries, it is very beneficial in the perspective of preschool preparation. They have an enormous positive effect on children' basic knowledges and vitally important skills To conclude, attending to nurseries before a primary school has a big amount of advantages and I strongly believe that there is no need for a
chold
a young person of either sex
child
cold
hold
 to stay at home for a long period of time.

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