In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past

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Most people would agree that preserving connections with our past is an admirable objective, especially as the world evolves so rapidly. I feel that traditional costumes are one part of doing
this
, but they are by no means the most important, as we shall see. Admittedly, historic costume plays a key role in social events
such
as religious rituals or military parades, and these events are helpful in transmitting social memes
such
as a public duty and self-sacrifice. Traditional costumes
also
remind us of the origins of cultural traditions and mythologies,
for instance
the historic Swiss national dress which evokes their medieval independence.
However
, it must be said that costumes are an accessory in these situations, and do not appear to constitute the central message. It is the ceremonies themselves, which convey the cultural norms that help to maintain the fabric of society. In
this
sense, the costumes are of secondary importance.
Furthermore
, it seems that there are in fact much more powerful ways in which culture is conserved and handed down between the generations. Most countries have a rich heritage of legends and folklore about the birth and development of their nation, some of which are mythological and some being grounded in truth (as we see in the English stories about Robin Hood or George and the Dragon,
for example
.) These stories are a cultural inheritance which embodies important symbols and concepts far more effectively than a dress.
Similarly
, we must remember the significance of art and music in passing on our traditions, in forms ranging from fine art to handicrafts, and from opera to traditional shanties and dirges. The presence of visual or linguistic messages in these media make them more effective than costumes, which convey no language. Overall, we must recognise and welcome the use of traditional dress in helping to maintain our culture.
However
, the forms of story, art and music would appear to be the driving forces in
this
invaluable process

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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