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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Ma'am, I'm writing to you regarding a language that I inadvertently left on a recent flight to London. I was travelling on flight SG-971 on 20 December and realized that I had forgotten the bag after arriving at my hotel. Just to describe the briefcase, it's a medium in size and black colour of ABC brand. Add to that,
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 is my daughter's favourite bag, so she used to stick animals, and cartoon stickers, please check, if
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 can help you to expedite the identification of the missing items.
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, it has mostly toys and clothes for our daughter,
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, it's very important to find
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 missing item at your earliest convenience, as she is very particular about her dresses and stuffed toys. I would be extremely grateful if you could assist me in retrieving the bag. I am currently staying at ABC Hotel in London and can be reached at +9877654321 or [email protected]. Thank you for your time and assistance in
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 matter. Sincerely, ABC

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task achievement
Ensure to mention the exact flight information, such as the departure city or time, for clarity.
coherence cohesion
Consider structuring the letter more neatly by separating the details about the incident, description, and request into distinct paragraphs.
greeting and closing
The closing of the letter is appropriately respectful, leaving a positive impression.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for communication with an airline.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Airliner, oversight, misplaced, personal belongings, valuable items, sentimental significance, luggage retrieval, lost and found, passenger service, tracking, compensate, verification of ownership, promptly, inconvenience, coordinate, verify, transparent communication
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