The media should include stories which report good news do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, journalists have published more negative news than positive reports.
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, there are many people argue that publishers should take efforts to report many motivating and inspiring stories than pessimistic ones. In my opinion, I consider including
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articles would create a positive outlook about the country and motivate people of that
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in their life. The primary reason for either broadcasting or publishing any information which has some benefits l to the public is that
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can project positive sides,
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, about the government, business firms, and new projects. Eventually,
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the face
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, more and more tourists and
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someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
would be attracted, which may bring an economical boost to that nation in a long run.
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, reporting a great number of negative news would tarnish the nation's name and fame unnecessary. Another point here is that, native people feel proud about their
home land
the country where you were born
homeland
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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
current affairs.
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means patriotism can be developed, which is essential to strength relationship among citizens and reduce conflicts between people of different beliefs. They, gradually, learn how to tolerate and respect others.
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, before pronouncing some sensitive
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(law) the findings of a jury on issues of fact submitted to it for decision; can be used in formulating a judgment
verdicts
, the judicial system warns new agencies to
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hold back; refuse to hand over or share
withhold
reporting the judgement in a way which hurt others feeling. In conclusion, reporting more great article is essential, according to some, and I strongly
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give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
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brings many advantages to countries’ financial status and integrity to the public.

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