Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s

world many

Accept comma addition

world, many

judgmental beliefs are changing

conistantly

without variation or change, in every case

constantly

. According to some, fighting crimes could be achieved by

sentencing commiters longer period

Suggestion

a sentencing committees longer period

sentencing committees longer period

in prison, while others think that there are innovative ways to reduce crime rates in societies. I consider that there are innovative ways to reduce crimes than locking up prisoners for longer periods. On one hand, many people are convinced that crimes are

commited

bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude

committed

due to the

abscence

the state of being absent

absence

of strict laws to fight it,

consequently

crime rates will increase as there will be no fear of the punishment.

For instance

, legislation of new laws that implements longer sentences, will reduce the numbers of offenders from the streets.

Also

,

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

particular crimes like death, stealing and raping are unacceptable in any community,

thus

they would require

to eliminate

Suggestion

eliminating

such

sinnful

characterized by iniquity; wicked because it is believed to be a sin

sinful

people from their communities for as long as they can.

On the other hand

, according to new studies, many wrongdoers gain the tendency to commit crimes

as a result

of plenty of social and

economical

Suggestion

economic

failures.

However

, the solution to

this

problem is by

eleminating

terminate, end, or take out

eliminating

elimination

illuminating

poverty as well as providing more jobs to

citizens

Suggestion

the citizens

.

Moreover

, some criminals have

phsycological

mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature

psychological

disorders, owing to the lack of healthcare support

nessesary

absolutely essential

necessary

for their treatment, they tend to become criminals. If governments work on their healthcare systems to identify those with mental illness, and provide the right treatment for them, it will

derastically

in a drastic manner

drastically

reduce that type of crimes. To sum up, while people may vary in their opinion whether longer sentences or alternative ways could reduce the crime rates and eliminate wrongdoers from societies. I believe that it is better to address the issue in an innovative alternative ways.