Question: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you will like the school to offer.

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feedback on the cookery course I did two weeks ago.

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. She is

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a great teacher and I understood all the steps she highlighted in baking an ice cream cake. My cooking has really improved since I enrolled in the course and

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compliments by friends and families. I bake cakes almost every week because my children love

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and they always ask for

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. I would suggest the school offers a course on how to make Egusi soup as

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my husband best soup and I am eager to learn how to make it. I hope my suggestion would be given

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positive consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, James John