You are attending a part of course in the college. Due to some problem you cannot continue your course. write a letter to your teacher. describe the course explain the problem tell the teacher about your future plans

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my inability to continue the master of
sales
course
. I hope you understand my situation and cooperate with me.
This
course
is all about how to boost up
sales
in the market.
Although
it covers all the needed criteria for obtaining good experience in
sales
.
Also
, the teacher is very capable of teaching and everything is understandable easily by the students. Unfortunately,
that is
not what I am
worrying
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about. The actual problem started when we started learning and doing our practical studies which involve lots of travelling in order to gain
sales
idea
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in the current market.
However
, I cannot cope
up
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with
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the travelling due to my leg injury that I suffered from accident five years back.
Also
, the fees for the
course
is too expensive, So it is affecting my budget badly. I hope to join another
course
which
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that
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does not require much physical effort. I am planning for a budgeted college to enrol in
accounting
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program, which will help me to secure a job in finance. I was wondering if I could get my fees as
refund
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a refund
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which I can utilize for paying fees. I hope you look into
this
matter closely and do the needful. Your's Sincerely, Shala Aiman.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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