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Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie? Explain your answer giving reasons and specific examples.

#people #truth #lie
In the 21st century, we have become a
society
, where we cannot recognize where
truth
, where lie. In daily routine, at work we communicate with people. Mass media
(
Accept space
(
newspapers
,
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,
magazines) give us a lot of
information
 which we can
us
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
 while communicating with people. Nowadays we face to face
information
(
Accept space
(
political
,
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,
social and
etc
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ethical
ethic
arts
), which tell us only
truth
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truthful
information
. But, in
fact we
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fact, we
 have actually
information
 or "
information
 elites" manipulating us? In the
first
 place we must speak about "
truth
" and
it`s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 role in our
society
.
Truth
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The truth
 according his characteristics have
important role
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an important role
 in our
society
. People start or build his relations with
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 people by truthful relations.
Truth
 base of long and strong relations
beween
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
 people. The
truth
 never hurt
someone
any person
anyone
.
On the other hand
, people using
lie
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lies
 to start relations with people, to
hid
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hide
 something and etc.
Orginally
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Originally
 lie broke relations among people, but today our
society
use
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
 lies parallel with
truth
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the truth
. Mass media
,
Accept space
,
 government everyday says a lot of untruthful
information
 and manipulating people. To start with
socio
relating to human society and its members
social
-political
information
, they have "High" level of lies or untruthful
information
 (included:
information
 about political leaders, about parties, about domestic and international affairs). Other spheres use less untruthful
information
.
For example
:
scientifics
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scientists
scientific
, engineers and etc. In conclusion, we must underline that, the telling
truth
 a good weapon to beat the people who tell lies as his work and destroy good relations among people.

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