Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government spending

have been criticized

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has been criticized

throughout the world on the basis of preferences. These people claim that

government

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the government

wastes

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in the field of arts which could be preferably spent on other important areas.

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a mental position from which things are viewed

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despite benefits related to spending on other areas. Many people think that art sector should not be look after by government and

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designated for it is not justified. They think that

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should be spend

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should be spent

in different areas

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as

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in

education and

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. Education, no

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very necessary for every single person as it changes the perspective of

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improve

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the country’s literacy rate

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opine that

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of

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the country

a country

should be strong and advanced which is

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a valid point as good roads promotes tourism. Electricity is a major requirement in

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era and many rural people are not being blessed with

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facility.

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, report infers that 40 percent of

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the population

in Africa lives without electricity supply. These issues bolstered people that

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specified for

arts

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the arts

should be spend

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should be spent

on the different areas as mentioned to lessen the problems faced by different people irrespective of from where they belong. People, including me and especially artists, have been excessively concerned about government’s spending on

arts

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the arts

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view point is justified as it leads to

promotion

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the promotion

of culture and artists throughout the world. Many handmade

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clothing in general

clothes

and handicrafts made by small artists which is

identity

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an identity

of any region is immensely liked and purchased by tourists from different areas of

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the world

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, Sindhi culture is described through a shawl known as Ajrak which is very popular. Country’s spending on artists promote their talent and

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boost the economy as well. If

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designated for

arts

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the arts

is spent on areas

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as education and

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than results will be grave as it will not only be in favourable of economy but

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artists will be demoralized, jobless and living would be compromised. Overall, the idea of relocating arts

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is ill-informed,

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, problems will not only be unsolved but will

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have worse outcomes In conclusion,

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essay argues that people who favoured spending of

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on arts in unreasonable have flawed understanding and underestimate the effects of what they believe. In my opinion, these problems cannot be solved by shifting the

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and making

arts sector

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the arts sector

deprived, as it can be tackled by awareness, team work effort by NGOS and increasing the

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, not by relocating, for education and

infrastructure

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.