More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development have more advantages over disadvantages?

Food is an indispensable substance that existence rests upon. There has been an upswing in the consumption of oven-ready foods rather than newly made foods by some persons. Despite the advantages
such
as time-saving and economic development, I consider the benefits derived are minimal to the setbacks from these processed feeds. Without any doubt, a major advantage of accepting
this
type of meal is its accessibility when needed. It requires lesser effort and shorter time in making it available.
In other words
, it saves time for the purpose of doing other important things, especially for career-focused individuals. It doesn't contribute to the stress already acquired in work- processes and
this
has enabled some persons to become the man/woman of their dream.
In addition
,
this
has
also
provided a means of income for some people. Having to provide ready-made food has promoted
entrepreneurship which
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entrepreneurship, which
indirectly hires more suppliers of
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
.
This
cannot be denied to
contributes
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contribute
largely to the economic development of a nation because it reduces the rate of unemployment in the society. Regardless of the benefits, one of the
uncompromised
setbacks is the preserving agents the fast-foods contain. The preservatives used in conserving
this
type of meal could be life-threatening. Considering the report from the Standard Organisation of Nigeria
(
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(
2017), it frowned at the compositions of ready-made
foods especially
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foods, especially
the seasoning which relatively has no benefit on people's
health but
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health, but
instead
, contributes largely to health-related issues
such
as
obese
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obesity
, diabetes, cardiovascular issues.
Consequently
, it endangers and reduces
lifespan
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life span
.
Furthermore
, it encourages indolence, especially in women. Mothers seem to find
this
as a shortcut to providing meals for themselves and their family members due to their busy schedules.
This
merely provides an avenue for their partners to state the specification of how they want their food
tasted
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to taste
.
For example
, a diabetic spouse will not take preference in ready-made foods due to the standard of spices added in making it which contradicts the
wellbeing
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well being
of a high-level sugar patient. In conclusion, irrespective of the advantages of ready-made meals, the luscious taste, and the life-saving effect of freshly made feeds overrides the downside fast-foods offer.
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