The costs of medical health care are increasing all the time. Governments are finding it difficult to balance the health care budget. Should citizens be totally responsible for their own health costs and take out private health insurance, or is it better to have a comprehensive health care system which provides free health services for all? Discuss your viewpoint on this issue.

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For many decades, medical science has become a debatable issue across the globe because of its excessive annual budget. While some people
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admit
that it is the duty of people to live an active lifestyle to avoid
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issues and not to burden the
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for their illness, others are of the opinion that a regulated
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care
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management system must be there for
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the taxpayers
taxpayers
of the country. In
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essay we will discuss both of these views and why I conceive that by
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the collaborative effort
a collaborative effort
of both by civic bodies and citizens would
aleviate
provide physical relief, as from pain
alleviate
the problem of
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care
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budget. There are many compelling reasons to believe that people of the country are solely liable their bad
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. It has been generally seen that because of junk food, majority number of people have been developing diseases
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obesity which
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obesity, which
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for
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depression, excessive fatigue and sleep disorder.
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, workaholics due to their hectic schedule and children because of their taste often depend om fast food which drastically weakens their overall
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;
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leading to overweight and anxiety problems. These circumstances could easily be avoided by controlling the amount of processed food people intake,
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majority of
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issues are self-created and citizens must not seek free aid for
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issues from the
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.
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, there is a group of people who insists that it is the responsibility of public bodies to take
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of their people's
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by developing a
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health-
the preservation of mental and physical health by preventing or treating illness through services offered by the health profession
healthcare
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program for free for each individual. I certainly believe that treatment for life-
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threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
treating
diseases
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as cancer and
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Ebola
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must be included
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in
the program as the cost is huge which is not affordable by everyone.
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, the
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shall fix a cap on the amount of free
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services.
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,
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agencies could provide
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medical services at subsidised rates so that the country's
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care
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budget could be balanced effectively.
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, for hazardous and growing diseases, it is recommended to develop a
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scheme. In conclusion,
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it is the duty of the
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to protect and provide medical support to their
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citizens, but
that should only be applicable to life-
threatning
threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
treating
diseases. An individual must follow an active lifestyle to avoid petty diseases. I strongly believe that with
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the combined efforts
of the citizens and their
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, the amount of
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issues could be terribly reduced.
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