It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The trend of taking one
year
gap in between the completion of school and the university Use synonyms
has rapidly surged
. Despite, distraction from learning field, there is Suggestion
is rapidly surging
development
of people both mentally and socially. In my opinion, taking a gap is far more Suggestion
the development
advantegous
as it develops giving an advantage
advantageous
enumoreous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
crictical
life related skills.
marked by a tendency to find and call attention to errors and flaws
critical
Firstly
, the benefit of leave of a Linking Words
year
is it forces Use synonyms
student
to face Suggestion
the student
different situation
. Suggestion
a different situation
different situations
Futhermore
, they in addition
Furthermore
are engaged
Suggestion
engage
inactivities
where they develop and enhance skills related to communication, critical Suggestion
in activities
thiniking
, problem solving and many more. To illustrate, when the process of using your mind to consider something carefully
thinking
i
took a refers to the speaker or writer
I
year
off, people raised Use synonyms
question
which lead me to thinking of Suggestion
questions
reason
for their question which enhanced thinking along with Suggestion
the reason
a reason
capability
of tackling problems. Suggestion
capable
Linking Words
Also
Accept comma addition
Also, this
this
period introduced to Linking Words
improving
public speaking and enhanced my friend making capability. Twelve months, free time helped to develop skills which are necessary for entire life.
In the other hand, leave from education for a Suggestion
improve
year
create distraction from learning Use synonyms
sector which
results in forgetting Accept comma addition
sector, which
previously read
Suggestion
to previously read
knoweldge
and the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
also
feeling sleepy Linking Words
whil
reading. The reason behind a period of indeterminate length (usually short) marked by some action or condition
while
wheel
this
is people tend to focus on other field and as Linking Words
focou
diverts our mind start to eradicate those previously owned Suggestion
a focus
focus
the focus
idea
. To clarify, a recent report published by The Himalayan Times daily stated that people start to go out of track from respective field when leave is taken. Mind Suggestion
ideas
dirversion
from learning sector result in hard time in continuation.
The greater number an activity that diverts or amuses or stimulates
diversion
od
candidates prefer a connects a noun with the preceding word
of
year
leave from study before enrolling Use synonyms
to
Suggestion
in
teritary
education. coming next after the second and just before the fourth in position
tertiary
Although
, people are going out of education track in leave duration, they collect different useful handy skills in future. In my view, a Linking Words
year
off will Use synonyms
undoubtly
make people well prepared for following time.without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
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