In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What are the causes of this problem and what are some solutions?

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The normal

weight

of humans has significantly accelerated

globally

Suggestion

global

, and population lacks the determination to maintain a healthy body

weight

This

essay will discuss the causes which

includes

Suggestion

include

overeating and lack of physical

activity

and shall

also

suggest solution including

government

taxing sugary items and junk food and building

Suggestion

a more activity arena

activity

arena in each block to motivate people. Some countries' standard body index

weight

has been growing drastically while the

activity

ratio has been poor lately.

This

is because of the

overconsumption

of fast food items which are high on fats and carbs, as they are pocket-friendly and has less preparation time.

In addition

, most people have stopped physical activities

such

basic as walking, are preferring a cab even if the distance is shorter. In the USA itself,

for instance

, many people are diagnosed with cancer because of two reason one being consumption of meat excessively and

second

is negligent toward fitness.

Thus

, we

witness

Suggestion

are witnessing

many people nowadays suffering from obesity from a young age. To eradicate a sedentary lifestyle from people’s life

government

should spread awareness on the sugary, junk food’s ill effects, they should

also

levy huge taxes on these items which prohibit to exhibit of healthy ingredients in the product. In order to increase the fit meter of the country, the

government

could

also

invest in some recreational places in each block rather than constructing a new high rise mall. As these

activity

areas’ would be free of cost more and more people would utilize it.

For example

, Dubai was an obesity capital in the

2000s

Accept comma addition

2000s, however

however

once their

government

decided to build a lane for only runners known as “the walk” – it is a sponged based lane best for runners, and now people in that block are comparatively

healthy

Suggestion

healthier

than the previous decade.

Therefore

, with only adding taxes and recreational

activity

we would witness decreasing of the average

weight

. In Conclusion, some places in the world the standard

weight

of a person

is increasing whereas

Suggestion

are increasing, whereas

are increasing whereas

the physical

activity

is diminishing, to sustain the healthy population

this

essay has suggested a solution of governmental intervention to the problems caused by overeating and no fitness motivation.

Mon Nov 18 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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