You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter 1. describe what you enjoyed about the course 2. say how much cooking you have done since the course 3. suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to give my testimony for the short cooking

course

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making Punjabi curries, which I finished

from

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your school

last

month.

First

and foremost, the thing which I liked the most was the duration and practicality of the

course

.

Although

,

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there were many dishes to prepare and learn for,

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was extensive enough to cover all.

In addition

to that, I enjoyed learning new ways to prepare

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same

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curries from other team members and learnt to give

personalised

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touch of making dishes spicy. Ever since I finished the training

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cooking, I moved to Europe for a new job. Here I need to cook my food

everyday

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due to my dietary restrictions, but fortunately, because of what I learned from the

course

, I enjoyed cooking every single day. I tried to make different sweet and spicy curries every alternate day to take my tiffin to the office. I spend 45 minutes of time

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cooking daily. As I enjoy eating Indian

sweets

, I would like your school to organize

similar

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a similar

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short program of training for preparing

sweets

.

In particular

, those

sweets

which

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are been made from chick piece flour, sugar and condensed milk. I cannot wait to see

my self

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making

sweets

like Rasagulla and Gulab jamun. I recommend

this

course

to all cooking

enthusiast

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and look forward to learning new items in future. Yours faithfully,

Mr.

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Manan Trivedi.