In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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crime

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Crime

is the major concern in

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era, which is important to control by implementing different ways. In many nations, prison is considered as

best possible solution

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the best possible solution

of

crime

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, whereas other's believe that

education

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is adequate approach which might curb the individual to commit the

crime

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. I personally agree with

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notion.

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essay,

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subsequent paragraphs

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the subsequent paragraph

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, there are many reasons why

education

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is the best possible method to control the

crime

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Firstly

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,

education

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helps to teach them and get a good job. Most of the offenders commit crimes because they do not have a good job for earning money and

education

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gives a chance to earn more. If they start earning, they do not commit

crime

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further

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in their life.

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,

education

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also assist

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also assists

them to understand what is right or wrong. As it involves

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detailed

study of different punishments of different crimes. In

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way, criminals understand how bad for them to commit a

crime

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ultimately reduce

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ultimately reduces

the

occurance

an event that happens

occurrence

of

crime

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.

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, it is clear,

education

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plays

effective role

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an effective role

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deminish

decrease in size, extent, or range

diminish

the

voilence

an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)

violence

of

crime

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. Contrastingly,

education

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is best option to reduce the level of

crime

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, but sometimes strict punishments

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as prison is essential for criminal. One main reason behind

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some

crime

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commiters

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computer

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commits

do not understand only by educating them, they understand by rigid punishments.

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, there are many

terriest

someone who travels for pleasure

tourists

who always attack the other countries, they learn the lesson only by strict punishment or to arrest them. Despite

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,

crime

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can

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can also be reduced

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be reduce by showing

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consequencies

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

consequence

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leads

to create

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to creating

fear in the mind of criminal. In

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way, they never think about to commit the

crime

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. So, these are some steps which can be helpful to curb the crimes. In conclusion,

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alternative

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an alternative

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is

available to overcome the problem of

crime

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, but

education

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is the most valuable way to

contol

power to direct or determine

control

crime

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. As it not only stop

crime

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, but

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make the life of

criminal

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crime

by

provide

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providing

adequate job in future.