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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It has been argued by many that there is a rising trend in the families to migrate abroad for the jobs,
thus
 causing a significant effect on the lives of their kids. These impacts are both beneficial and adverse. Children are benefitted in the sense that they study in the best institutions, whereas racial issues can make their lives miserable. In my opinion, I believe that the young ones will have more chances to flourish by acquiring better education. On the one hand,
secondment
 abroad will open avenues for the youngsters by the virtue of world class studies and I
also
 support
this
 fact.
Firstly
, schooling, specially foundation years, is very important for
further
 progress.
Secondly
, overall grooming has a deep impact on the personality building of a kid.
Moreover
, healthy competition is must for the best outcome. All these things are available in the developed countries, so the siblings will acquire all these skills and later on becoming successful.
For instance
, a recent study has shown that 75% of the families that moved to the USA in 2018, wanted to impart quality education to their families.
On the other hand
, foreign deputed families have a common issue that their younger generation has to survive the racial problems. Natives of the country are always graded as the superior citizens.
Furthermore
, it has a negative impact on the growing minds.
This
 will make them short tempered, agitated and frustrated.
Thus
, the kid feels like a stranger in the fast moving country.
For example
, the racial attitude has more incidence in Australia. To conclude, I believe that educational institutions make or break the kid and in the western world, there are too many resources which pave their way towards a better future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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