People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibilities to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

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It is a well-known fact that

environment

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the environment

became a tough issue in modern reality. Whereas it is spoken that human beings are the ones who pollute the planet more than other specious, many people still refuse to take responsibility and change their lifestyle to save our ecology.

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However, there

are many reasons why people behave that way, it is extremely significant to encourage them to act and reinforce the desire of those who make

everyday effort

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the everyday effort

everyday efforts

to change the situation. In my opinion the

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and foremost reason why some people don’t care about ecosystem protection among developing countries is low life standards.

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, those, whose daily basic aim is

surviving

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survived

, can hardly ever think of plastic recycling or their carbon footprint.

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, while the authorities are not interested in

improvement

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improving

ecological situation

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the ecological situation

, the civilians will not have resources and enough knowledge to start the process, so the main role in

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change

implementation, including

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an important problem as environmental protection, belongs to

government

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the government

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, there

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are

no people who do not take part in

garbage recycling

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garbage, recycling

or get anywhere with

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process in

developed

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developing

countries,

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as Sweden, Belgium or Germany.

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in the countries where its locals are responsible for keeping the nature resources safe and sound are at risk of

payment

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paying

high fines in case they disobey the rules and laws according to which everyone is required to do certain procedures not to produce a lot of garbage or pollute the air.

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the penalty system

encourage

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encourages

people to live according the laws, the

rewarding

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reward

system is

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a useful tool.

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, when

Sweden government

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the Sweden government

had wanted to reduce carbon dioxide pollution in their cities they made a bill according to which locals, who used

electromobiles

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instead

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of petrol diesel cars, would pay less taxes than petrol diesel car owners.

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, the number of

electromobiles

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drivers increased rapidly in short time. To sum up, protection of environment is a serious problem which can only be solved through unity and people collaboration. Despite of the fact that ecology should be our number one priority, a lot of

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world countries struggle with different social and

economical

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economic

problems, which influence on people’s life priorities.

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, only through dealing with these problems and helping each other we will be able to

unit

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unify

and save our

specie

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species

from extinction.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibilities to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

Your opinion

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replaced humans in the workplace? Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fossil fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?

Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.