People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibilities to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

It is a well-known fact that
environment
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the environment
became a tough issue in modern reality. Whereas it is spoken that human beings are the ones who pollute the planet more than other specious, many people still refuse to take responsibility and change their lifestyle to save our ecology.
However there
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However, there
are many reasons why people behave that way, it is extremely significant to encourage them to act and reinforce the desire of those who make
everyday effort
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the everyday effort
everyday efforts
to change the situation. In my opinion the
first
and foremost reason why some people don’t care about ecosystem protection among developing countries is low life standards.
In other words
, those, whose daily basic aim is
surviving
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survived
, can hardly ever think of plastic recycling or their carbon footprint.
Moreover
, while the authorities are not interested in
improvement
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improving
ecological situation
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the ecological situation
, the civilians will not have resources and enough knowledge to start the process, so the main role in
changes
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change
implementation, including
such
an important problem as environmental protection, belongs to
government
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the government
.
In contrast
, there
is
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are
no people who do not take part in
garbage recycling
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garbage, recycling
or get anywhere with
this
process in
developed
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developing
countries,
such
as Sweden, Belgium or Germany.
Also
in the countries where its locals are responsible for keeping the nature resources safe and sound are at risk of
payment
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paying
high fines in case they disobey the rules and laws according to which everyone is required to do certain procedures not to produce a lot of garbage or pollute the air.
Although
the penalty system
encourage
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encourages
people to live according the laws, the
rewarding
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reward
system is
also
a useful tool.
For instance
, when
Sweden government
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the Sweden government
had wanted to reduce carbon dioxide pollution in their cities they made a bill according to which locals, who used
electromobiles
instead
of petrol diesel cars, would pay less taxes than petrol diesel car owners.
As a result
, the number of
electromobiles
drivers increased rapidly in short time. To sum up, protection of environment is a serious problem which can only be solved through unity and people collaboration. Despite of the fact that ecology should be our number one priority, a lot of
third
world countries struggle with different social and
economical
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economic
problems, which influence on people’s life priorities.
Thus
, only through dealing with these problems and helping each other we will be able to
unit
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unify
and save our
specie
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species
from extinction.

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