The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in regards to express my concerns on the decision taken to demolish the

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palace and to make shopping

center

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in its place. The building which you have planned to bring down is one of the

renowed

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renowned

architechtually

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architecturally

and vintage standing in our area, it has been

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of attraction for many years and most of our childhood is spent inside the building exploring it. Preserving

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structure is really important as we have many

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visiting

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place year on year. I would suggest you

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reinnovate

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renovate

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re-innovate

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building rather than destroying it, as we already have too many shopping areas in the city

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we have only one building which represents our ancient people and culture. If we re-design it there many people would revisit

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place and would place the word of mouth across the globe about

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beautiful structure. Your swift co-operation is greatly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Navleen