A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Sarah, one of the fans of your magazine.I am delighted to know that you need contributions from your readers for your upcoming article. I am writing
this
letter regarding the book
that have
influenced me a lot.
Change the verb form
has
Firstly
, the book
which influenced me was,
the Remove the comma
apply
book
named "The Monk Who Sold His Ferrari". This
is the
non-fiction Correct article usage
a
book
, which tells us how to succeed in our life
. I have seen a drastic change in my lifestyle after I read this
book
.
This
book
has seven chapter
in it. Each chapter conveys a different technique to enhance our Change to a plural noun
chapters
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Additionally
, the author has mentioned the real
Add a hyphen
real-life
life
story of a man who have
adapted to Change the verb form
has
the
healthy Correct article usage
a
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
This
chapter influenced me a lot.
I would recommend all the people to read this
book
, mainly because it is much
informative. Rephrase
very
Although
it has a
plenty of pages, it will Remove the article
apply
benifit
them a lot. Correct your spelling
benefit
This
book
is readly
available Correct your spelling
readily
really
in
all the Change preposition
on
e-commers
Change noun form
e-commer's
e-commers'
website
. Fix the agreement mistake
websites
Additionally
the audio Add a comma
Additionally,
book
is available for free on Youtube.
I am glad that I had a change
to share my experience regarding Correct your spelling
chance
this
book
. Please let me know if any information is required.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah.Submitted by r.harip3 on
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Structure
Ensure clear paragraphing to reflect distinct sections of your content, which you did effectively by introducing the book, describing its influence, and recommending it to others.
Content
Maintain a clear focus on the prompt throughout your letter, seamlessly integrating personal anecdotes and general advice to bolster your argument.
Language
Consider varying your sentence structure and vocabulary to enhance readability and keep the reader engaged.
Task Achievement
You effectively fulfilled the task by describing the book, explaining its influence on you, and suggesting its potential impact on others.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter is well-organized, with a logical flow of ideas and coherent paragraphing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite