Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Sports people are earning too much now a days. Most of the earning they are getting from the advertisements. Salary is just like the secondary income for them. Even after earning from other sources they are getting high salary. Now a days they are like a celebrity and people love them. Companies

also

want to promote their product from them and for few

second

advertisements on TV they are paid in millions.

Also

, we can see them in product launch where they are

also

earning too much. Even after having many sources of income why they are getting paid amounts in the form of salary.

On the other hand

salaries of the sport persons are fair as there are very few professional sport persons and they represent the nation. They are the face of a nation. They always have too much pressure on them to maintain their pace in the sports. If they don't perform their reputation will be down and income sources will be shrink because no one wants to see the loser everyone wants to see the winner always.

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Prediction or recommendation

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

181 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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